Feedback from class

Audience Feedback/Research

After we made the initial ideas we drafted up a pitch, which consisted of a variety of different aspects of the film such as the genre, the storyline, editing and so on. We presented this pitch to the class in order to find out whether our movie would attract the people we were aiming it at. Once the pitch was completed we asked the class to relay information back to us, on what they liked, and different variations that we should be thinking about when producing our trailer.

Feedback -

Establishing every character within the film -

This is one of the things that we have to make sure that we cover correctly. If the characters are not well established within the trailer people may be unclear on what the story may end up like, therefore may be withdrawn to going to see in the cinema. We will make sure the characters are well establish by filming a large amount on each individual person, this way i am able to chose the appropriate parts in the film to put in the trailer, and i will only be choosing the parts which establish each character in a good manner.

Choreographing the fight scenes -

I feel this is definitely something that me and Lewis should be thinking about, if we plan to make a good looking professional trailer then all the fight scenes have to be choreographed sufficiently, we cannot just have random punches and kicks being thrown. We want our characters to look like that they have been trained to handle with such events, therefore planning ahead on how to fight while be necessary.

Expanding/developing characters more -

This basically means that the characters based within our film have to be developed a lot more than they were in our first short movie. To do this we have to present the emotions of each character individual, showing their various temperaments, and how they may react to different environments.

Conventions/editing style -

I will need to do a very intense edit if I want to attract the correct people, I want to jam as much as i can into the trailer, however I wasn’t the audience who are watching it almost to be disorientated to what they are watching, a leave them wanting more, so that they will visit the cinema to watch the movie.

- Nathan Childs